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Yep, I would read more.

 

You have a hook there Blake, now I want the rest of the story.

 

 

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Remember; make your comments about Blake’s story on this thread, not on his story thread.

 

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You are right. He has a very good hook. Blake, you gave just enough information to make me want to know more of the story.
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Yea, I would read more, I personally like the story that ends with the same scene it opened with. It may be a little cliche, but after you reach a certain age you have heard every story before - now you're just looking for a new and unique way for it to be told. This one seems to have a promising beginning.

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I would also be interested in reading more on this too.

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Thank you all, it occurred to me the other day that perhaps I should respond over here.

Problem is there are three different drafts of the next chapter, I haven't decided which story I want to put my name on.

I'm either going to end up with War and Peace, or a serial, or just choose which life I want Sarah to lead and do some editing. She's not helping, she keeps going places I didn't expect.


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